Beyond the Light
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30 comments:
it would be nice if maxie checks the apartment herself and finds nothing then tells the guy that she is pregnant
then the guy tells maxie he's gay, nyahahaha!
The guy wakes up. It was all a dream after all.
after the guy admits he's gay maxie cries, walks out, slams the door back. on the other hand, after maxie leaves, the guy calls up his other girl telling her that their plan of getting rid of maxie works and reveals that the is not really a gay. :)
hindi ko maintindihan ano sinasabi malabo yung sounds
ya, i like jungleboy's idea. It would be nice if Maxie hears the guy revealing that he's not really gay and plans how to get him back.hehe.
"a heated argument boils up between the guy and maxie. They argue about their current relationship. Maxie's been feeling jealous and even suspicious that this guy has another girl. Naturally, the guy denies all the blames hurled at him and they end up in nasty violence - shouting at each other and throwing the pieces of furniture all around the house.. then.. all of a sudden, the doorbell rings again, the "other girlfriend" comes and is shocked to see Maxie with the very same guy she's dating because it turns out that Maxie and this "other girlfriend" are sisters. They've been dating the same guy for months without knowing so." - christine aw
hehehe! i hope it's not too cliche... it's can be an interesting twist to your story if you can make all the emotions and scenes real real dramatic. if i think of something better, i'll post again. ;) btw, try making the sounds/ dialogues sound clearer next time cuz it was kinda hard to decipher the words from the muffled sound. =)
adding to winchell's maybe the "other girl" that walks in on them is not a sister but maxie's lesbo lover lol! let's make this nasty! lol!
well the girl asks the guy if there is someone else in the room with him. After denying it, the girl checks the apartment to see if someone is hiding somewhere. Seeing no one around, she pulls the guy closer to her and whisphers in his ears saying..."(Guy's name), what took you so long to open the door? You know, i've been looking for you everywhere coz i wanted to ask you something, and i wanted to do it alone in private. Well (guy's name), we've been friends for so long and i've been wanting to ask you this...but i'm afraid you might turn me down.." The guy answers back saying, "It's ok, maxine. What is it that you've been wanting to tell me?" The girl hesitated for a while and said, " well (guy's name), is it ok with you if...if...we...play jackstone? Look, i brought them along with me...can we play, please???" The guy hesitated for a while but in the end, he agreed to the girl. =) (hehehehe!!!)
Dapat may ISANG dadating tapos iiyak. Tapos kakanta ng jeepney and then babanat ng cheesy lines. haha tapos since iranian boy toy siya paparty na lang siya sa emba with the iranians.
maybe maxie is a sleep walker and the guy doesn't know how to deal with it anymore coz she does this every bloody night. She wakes up and barges to his dorm (i dunno, they're sort of neighbors?? or something...) and says things she doesn't mean (and doesn't know she's saying)and it's really getting the better of him. because somethings turn out to be true, or if they aren't true yet, they somehow come true. So he wonders, how the hell does she know all these things?? What else does she know and does she know that she knows all these things? Tonight she accuses him of cheating on her... and she's got all the details of his infidelity and he sorta freaks out. Is this girl really sleep walking or she's up to something else?
Maybe Maxie can show pictures of the guy with another girl.. Then drag a detective to prove that it was them dining out in a classy restaurant
so when will the next part of the video be uploaded? i've been dying to know what happens next. please make it clearer this time.
i just thought that maybe its also nice if maxie was the one having an affair. she goes to the guys house searches the apartment and finds another guy in there that happens to be the guy she is having an affiar with. they end up having an affiar triangle. boy A likes maxie and boy B, boy B likes maxie and boy A and maxie likes both guys. threesome coolsome!!!
it would be cool if the girl suddenly takes off her clothes and jumps on the bed with him hehe, Free Porn! :)
i couldn't agree with anonymous more. i like his idea. i really hope you guys get to make the girl jump into bed with that guy. i bet it would end up nice and sex always sells. the girl looks hot anyway. if that happens your blog will be in my favorite list.
the clip was very informative. i like the cast and how they played their role. it was funny, exciting, scary and inspiring all at the same time! i would recommend this clip to my friends. great job! make another clip!
wala naman relation comment ni nooksey eh ang labo...
HOY Anonymous 2007-01-01 01:59,
nde mo pa kasi alam ung ending eh! panuorin mo muna bago ka humirit!
an idea far from theirs: what if she barged in her apartment to confront him about why he's been avoiding her after they kissed in the moviehouse? eh they both have their own relationships that they both wanna keep. what maxie wants though is a clear closure, that's why she wants to talk to her. to her, their friendship's still worth keeping. though she genuinely loves her boy, she fell for a dear friend - the iraninan boy. her decision though's to stick with status quo, to leave the iranian boy and stick with her real boyfriend. but the iranian boy reacts to her immaturely. he drags her out of the room. shouts at her (because his girlfriend's noticed that he's acting differently, she had a feeling that her boy's cheating on her. that they had a heated argument about this previously that placed their treasured relationship on the brink of nothingness) and tells her to never bug him anymore, in a very rude manner. he slams the door leaving maxie out in shock with deep calm sadness on her face. while standing outside, the iranian boy leaning on the well slides down to the floor and starts crying heavily. in the end, the viewers realize that he just didn't know how to react to the situation; that anger was his defense mechanism. in the end, it's showed that the iranian boy deeply fell for maxie too, but he had to make a decision and that was to keep his girlfriend he genuinely loves. the boy was hurting too... kadramahan ng buhay haha
great job guys. can wait too see what happens next
Hmm... you guys really had to use Javi and Anna huh? Haha! Anyways, here goes.
Anna starts searching the room to try and find underwear left by Javi's lover. She turns his room inside-out and finally finds a size 40 waist-line pink polka-dotted g-string thong. She starts screaming at Javi, questioning how he could be disloyal... and with a fat girl at that. Javi stays quiet, obviously still troubled by whatever upset him earlier in the day. Anna starts slapping him, and finally Javi snaps. He breaks down in tears as he exclaims he is gay! The g-string does not belong to a girl, but to Mohatmed, his Iranian futsal teamate. Apparently, Javi was so troubled because earlier Mohatmed confessed to him that he no longer had feelings for him and that he was leaving him for Sook, their Korean teamate. Anna is dumbfounded. With a blank stare she just blurts out, "I'm pregnant." (to be continued...)
Goodluck to you guys. I hope you use this. Can't wait to see Javi's true colors! Hahaha!
I like the pregnant idea! Dapat ano though, maybe make it not as drastic muna if the whole thing is gonna continue pa diba? dapat naman, parang pang flirting lang muna, make it so that theres some chemistry and an intro between the characters naman. sa totoo, hindi ko pa kilala ang mga characters, so kung pwede lang, habaan mo muna and gawin mo parang love triangle. hindi naman kailangan na bigla na meron bagong lalaki. hindi naman noh! tihihi, make it para mention lang. parang dawson's creek diba? basta, sa inyo na bahala! pero cute naman rin yung pregnant pero nakakatakot! tihihi!
yeah i agree with the previous anonymous. nakakatakot nga pagpregnant na bigla since hindi pa masyado introduced yung mga characters. i think it would be better if you guys can set the mood up a little bit more before jumping into the meat of the story. medyo climax part na ang "pregnent eh". but the idea of a love triangle will really be nice.
yeah. i also like the idea of the love triangle! that issue is always interesting! hehe! and then there could also be some sorta sickness that spread from one person to the other, since it's a love triangle. then it would also be interestingly cheesy if maxie would pretend that she doesn't like alec but she really does.
IT SEEMED LIKE THERE WAS REALLY NO RELATIONSHIP HERE AND THAT THE GIRL WAS TRYING TO INSINUATE THAT SHE'S JEALOUS WHICH WAS PRETTY OBVIOUS TO THE GUY. KAHIYA! THE GIRL BARGING IN LIKE THAT & BY THE LOOKS OF IT, IRANIAN NGA ANG DATING NUNG GUY! SO, WITH NO TOP, GOSH!!! MABALBON YUN!!! YAK!!! HAHAHAHA....
not sure of what to say but javi and anna u rock my socks! bitin un vid...
kudos to your good looking actors!
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